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THE FILES THE STUDIOS DON'T WANT YOU TO SEE

THE ISLAND OF LOST STORIES

No misfits here, just screenplays that saw their moment in the sun and then found their way to the shelf.


This page features a collection of projects, some sold, some that did not, and some still in development.   I've put them out here so you can examine some of the steps I take in bringing a story from idea to screenplay.


For each, you’ll find the plot points alongside the short story version that was created from those beats and used as a pitch before the screenplay was ever written. In some cases, you’ll also see an early draft of the screenplay itself.


Take a close look at how the plot points form the structural blueprint of the story, while the short story delivers that same material in a clear, engaging, and concise narrative. 


NOTE: All materials on this page are posted for educational purposes only.



Animated book characters stand under a moonlit sky in a mystical scene.

EL TORO BOMBITO

STATUS: PITCHED/NEVER SOLD

This is a short story written for an animation pitch about bulls and bullfighting. It was sold to The Weinstein Company for 24 hours before they reneged on the offer. Don't worry, karma caught up to them.  It remains unsold.

El Toro Bombito - Short Story (pdf)Download

SILENT RUNNING

STATUS: CREATED - NEVER PITCHED

These samples are from a plot point outline and a short story, created to pitch a remake of the movie SILENT RUNNING.  This pitch meeting never happened. The story remains unsold.

Silent Running: Plot Points (pdf)Download
Silent Running: Short Story (pdf)Download

REVERE

STATUS: SOLD/UNPRODUCED

This was a project written for Mel Gibson and Warner Brothers.  The plot points are very detailed and a great example of how your plot points should look like before you start writing.  This is a factual retelling of the events leading up to the Midnight ride of American hero and troublemaker - Paul Revere

Revere - Plot Points (pdf)Download
Revere - Screenplay (pdf)Download

ROBOTS

STATUS: PRODUCED

These are plot points and the short story from the first draft of Robots.  The file with the story contains never-before-seen concept art for the movie. This film was produced and released in 2005.

Robots Original Draft - Plot Points (pdf)Download
Robots Short Story (pdf)Download

THE URBAN LEGEND

STATUS: SOLD/UNPRODUCED

This is an unproduced project sold to Spielberg and Universal (not the horror movie with the same title).  It remains on a shelf somewhere at either company, gathering dust.  Spielberg loved the pitch and bought it in the room.  

The Urban Legend: Plot Points (pdf)Download
The Urban Legend Short Story (pdf)Download
The Urban Legend: Screenplay (pdf)Download

S.W.A.T

STATUS: PRODUCED

This is the draft of SWAT that got the project its first green light.  This draft is considered the best action version of the movie with no training sequences and an incredible fast pace.   For a really good background on this project, Redditor u/Russell-Trager-1984 did a really thorough deep dive.  Check that out HERE

SWAT - Green Light Draft (pdf)Download

24 HOURS TO LIVE

STATUS: PRODUCED

This is another of our produced screenplays.  This draft is the orginal action screenplay that got the project sold. Then, through over delveopment, the story changed and became less exciting with lower stakes. Watch the movie then read this draft and imagine how it could have been, especially with talent like Ethan Hawke.

24 Hours To Live (pdf)Download

TRACK DOWN

STATUS: SOLD/UNPRODUCED

This was the spec script screenplay that broke me into the industry. It was sold to Columbia Pictures in 1993 for $650,000.  It was a female lead action film for Jodi Foster. In time, the studio wanted Arnold Schwarzenegger, so we were asked to write both a female and male draft.  Both drafts can be found here.  You can learn more about this wild experience in the Film Courage interview

Trackdown With Female Lead (pdf)Download
Trackdown With Male Lead (pdf)Download

BAT OUT OF HELL

STATUS: REWRITE OF ALAN MCELROY SCRIPT/UNPRODUCED

This was not an original screenplay for us. It was a page-one rewrite of an Alan McElroy screenplay written for HBO.  This screenplay has a bit of a cult following, with fans of the project often asking why this wasn't made.   More about its cult status on this page of REDDIT. 

Bat Out Of Hell - Rewrite Plot Points (pdf)Download
Bat Out Of Hell (pdf)Download
Bat Out of Hell Comic Book used to Pitch this at Cannes (pdf)Download

THE WONDERFUL WIZARD OF OZ

STATUS: SOLD/UNPRODUCED

This animated story draws inspiration from the original L. Frank Baum novel. Unlike the deus ex machina of the 1939 classic, the Witch’s vulnerability to water is not treated as a secret in this version. In keeping with the source material, the Tin Man is portrayed as a Munchkin. The project was developed by French producers Laurent and Pascal Rodan. Its current status is somewhere over the rainbow.


Want to see something cool? Check out the artwork for this project :

TAKE ME TO OZ



Wonderful Wizard Of Oz - The Short Story (pdf)Download
The Wonderful Wizard of Oz - Screenplay (pdf)Download
Wonderful Wizard of Oz - Concept Art Part 1 (pdf)Download
Wonderful Wizard of Oz - Concept Art Part 2 (pdf)Download

MORE TO COME

Check back as we add more behind the scenes from produced and unproduced screenplays

Files coming soon.

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  • Start Here
  • About Ron Mita
  • Screenwriting Classes
  • I Like to Talk
  • My Process
  • 1. Spec Scripts
  • 2. Three Act Structure
  • 3. Plot Points
  • 4. 24 Plot Point Examples
  • 5. Creating Plot Points
  • 6. Plot Pointing with AI
  • 7. The Magnificent 7
  • 8. PP1 Inciting Incident
  • 9. PP6: 1st Act Break
  • 10. PP9 A Major Turn
  • 11. PP12: The MidPoint
  • 12. PP15 Twisting Again
  • 13. PP18 2nd Act Break
  • 14. PP24 The Finale
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